*sighs*

Nov. 26th, 2003 12:00 am
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Lovely fic. Was actually enjoying it, until I hit one HUGE, glaringly obvious mistake that ruined the whole thing.

The writer made Elrohir 8 years younger than Elladan.

*beats the Took with a dead coney* They're twins you moron. TWINS!!!

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Date: 2003-11-25 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crantz.livejournal.com
it was a really tedious labour for Celebrian...

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Date: 2003-11-27 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crantz.livejournal.com
elves are a stoic people. I can see them worrying for a bit but after the first month saying 'fuck it. call us when the head pops out' and wandering off while Celebrian demands a lot of hard alcohol.

Five years later they're at the table drinking coffee and remarking that 'it can't be long now'

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