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Lovely fic. Was actually enjoying it, until I hit one HUGE, glaringly obvious mistake that ruined the whole thing.
The writer made Elrohir 8 years younger than Elladan.
*beats the Took with a dead coney* They're twins you moron. TWINS!!!
The writer made Elrohir 8 years younger than Elladan.
*beats the Took with a dead coney* They're twins you moron. TWINS!!!
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Date: 2003-11-25 11:10 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2003-11-27 01:12 pm (UTC)I think after a matter of hours, she would be screaming for someone to cut it out.
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Date: 2003-11-27 01:22 pm (UTC)Five years later they're at the table drinking coffee and remarking that 'it can't be long now'